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Blue Rock Mine 2
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Date:
2006-02-06 08:54 am (UTC)
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You're welcome.
I'm not sure if the dialogue itself is the problem, because I think it fits the rest of the story. However, if you have trouble finding the right words inbetween, perhaps the best solution is to rewrite it so that you *can* find them.
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Date: 2006-02-06 08:54 am (UTC)I'm not sure if the dialogue itself is the problem, because I think it fits the rest of the story. However, if you have trouble finding the right words inbetween, perhaps the best solution is to rewrite it so that you *can* find them.